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My Canvas

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Vividly,
the morning light shines
upon my new masterpiece.
I watch covered in shadows
as the red ink drips slowly off my pen
on the pure snow
so beautiful it looks ,  
the red
violently contrasting the brillant white paper
as it drips as it drips.
Huh I never noticed before
its snowing again
new snow surrounds my masterpiece
blue snow flakes on my picture frame
looks so weird ,funny ,ironicly
patriotic
so am I now a patriot?
I giggle and walk away slowly
the ink has dried by now
oh well,
I wonder if they like my painting?
I could ask them now but
that wouldn't be fun
I guess I'll just wait for the headline
now on to my next
tomorrow.
After a dry streak lasting an almost entiere year I finally wrote a desent poem ! I'm so happy I could Throw Up!!!!!!!

I won't tell anyone what this poems about because its kinda oddvious, and I don't want anyone to feel stupid.




(P.S:please ignore any spelling mistakes I might make. nobodies perfect.)
( P.P.S:unless you want to correct me,but please be gentle I'm sensitive.:'(
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LordGraven's avatar
Yes Wolfie it is quite dark....Yet I can't help but feel as though I should be concerned...That is probably just me being my usual worry-wort self though....

And it is quite good